tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4896975146122414160.post8890941150851006441..comments2012-12-04T17:35:01.982-08:00Comments on Kathryn Reynolds' EDM310 Blog: Blog Post #4Kathryn Reynoldshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03927885724723807965noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4896975146122414160.post-31812172805239232502012-09-30T21:56:05.171-07:002012-09-30T21:56:05.171-07:00Kathryn the assignment called for us to summarize ...Kathryn the assignment called for us to summarize our reactions as well as what we have learned that we can use in your own podcast. It appears as though you described each assignment and did not include what you learned to include in your own podcast. I am not going to rehash the grammatical errors as Carly seems more qualified than I am in that respect, however I do suggust that you make sure you are following the directions for each assignment.<br />Myleshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05753324138453307524noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4896975146122414160.post-46260337096283316822012-09-26T16:32:28.505-07:002012-09-26T16:32:28.505-07:00I thought that you did a great job summarizing and...I thought that you did a great job summarizing and describing the podcasts, but would like to have seen a few more personal examples and commentary. <br />Be sure to watch for errors!<br />"Dinosaurs Before Dark" should be in parentheses to indicate that we are talking about a book. <br /> Be sure to use proper punctuation. For example, in the sentence: "For the second video I chose The Flat Stanley Podcast", there should be a comma after "video" because this is a separate clause.<br />Also, be sure to look for spelling errors such as "that I normal kid.."<br />In the following sentence, "Not only do they get to learn about technology (recording their stories)", the parentheses are unnecessary and could be replaced with an article like "by" before the phrase for more clarity. <br />Keep up the good work!<br />CarlyCarly Pughhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03970808660406912537noreply@blogger.com