tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4896975146122414160.post149385369723465011..comments2012-12-04T17:35:01.982-08:00Comments on Kathryn Reynolds' EDM310 Blog: Blog Post #10Kathryn Reynoldshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03927885724723807965noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4896975146122414160.post-33433973835992809992012-11-10T12:31:20.511-08:002012-11-10T12:31:20.511-08:00Kathryn,
You made a great point when you discussed...Kathryn,<br />You made a great point when you discussed the wide variety of information that can be gained from the internet. Like you said, there was a time when watching an opera or viewing artwork from around the world was not as easy as turning on a computer. Your post is informative and you voiced your opinion on the topics well. I did not notice any spelling errors; however, there are a few sentences that would flow smoother by inserting a comma. In the sentence "Many times in this class and others we have discussed how students not only enjoy learning when teachers incorporate art, music or games but also have a greater understanding of the material as well as better retention." there are a couple of places a comma could have been used. For example, I would have placed a comma between the word "games" and "but". Overall, I enjoyed reading your post.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com